#091 The Door Behind The Door 1 : Truth Revealed (Part 2)

Tiara pulled Albert hard as the hands were reaching out for Albert.

“Did..Did you see that?” asked Albert frightened.

“Sir! Please open the door!” Tiara shouted loudly.

The old man tried to open the door from outside but it would not budge.

“What happened?! The door cannot be opened from outside, you have to push it from inside!” shouted the old man anxiously.

The hands became longer to reach Albert. Tiara was so scared but she had no choice. She rushed to the door. As she got closer to the hands, the hands were like being pushed behind.

*BAM*

Finally Tiara was able push the door open from inside with her body.

“Hurry, bring him to my house. I can help your boyfriend!” ordered the old man.

They both helped Albert to go to the old man’s house and laid him on the bed. Albert was frightened and kept trembling. The old man made a glass of tea and murmured something on the glass. He then poured the tea into Albert’s mouth. Albert finally calmed down and fell asleep.

“Sir why there were hands and red lights from the door?” asked Tiara.

“I had told you before you entered the house, it is only for good people,” answered the old man.

The house was first discovered in a peaceful village where the people were very kind and religious. The people who got out from the house would have better things happened to their lives until one evil man from outside the village went into the house. From then onwards, the people there also called the house ‘The hell door behind the door’. The door would drag people with heavy sins to hell.

A was so shocked to hear the old man’s word!

-To Be Continued-

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#088 The Door Behind The Door 1 : Truth Revealed (Part 1)

Tiara and Albert were a couple who really liked to travel and visit new places. They had started traveling together since two years ago. Tiara had a website, which contents were about places she and Albert had been to. Tiara was the one who asked Albert to accompany her. Albert, without any objection, helped Tiara with her job.

One day Tiara got an email about a mysterious house in the suburb area where she lived. She told Albert and both of them were interested to visit the place. So the next morning they drove to their destination.

“I heard this place is kinda mysterious, mysterious places can be scary too right?” Said Tiara, who was leaning on Albert’s shoulder.            

“But I won’t be afraid to go to any of these places as long as I have you beside me. And I bet this place will invite more visitors to my website,” added Tiara.

They finally arrived and they met an old man who took care of the mysterious house. They greeted each other and talked for a while. Tiara then asked the old man for an interview. The old man said that for good people who entered the house, they would be better after they came out. However if bad people entered the house, it would be dangerous. After the interview, they all went to the entrance of the house.

“Beware of what I told you, this house is for good people,” warned the old man.

“Don’t worry, we are definitely good people, we are going in!”

Without saying anything more, Tiara held Albert’s hand and pulled him to enter the house. Then she opened the door of the house. As they were told, there was only a big pillar in the middle of the house where they could see their reflections. Then they did as what they were told, three times circling the pillar and stood one by one in front of the exit door. Tiara went first so she stood in front of the exit door but there was nothing happened.

“I guess there is nothing so scary here, even though I can see my ugly reflection from the pillar,” Tiara joked.

“Hey it’s your turn, come on,” added Tiara as she saw Albert was spacing out.

Albert stood in front of the exit door.

Suddenly the door emitted red lights and there were black hands covered with blood coming out from the door with noises of suffering. 

-To Be Continued-

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#085 The Tranquilizer 2 : The Last Blood (Part 8-End)

“So here you are Sean Frank, eh Diego Mann,” said Murdoc King. “You do love your girlfriend so much.”

“Let her go! This has nothing to do with her,” shouted Diego.

Murdoc King threw Julia at his bodyguard and the bodyguard held her. He told Diego to throw away all his tranquilizing tools and Diego did so.

“You killed my son, the only child I have, only your death can repay it,” said Murdoc King.

“I heard that you hate blood so much, let’s see how much you hate it,” added Murdoc King and he shot Diego’s left leg.

Diego kneeled on the ground.

“How does it feel to see blood from your body? How about if I shoot your right leg, your hands, and your head?”

Julia was so worried but she remembered the ring that Diego gave her. She hit the bodyguard who was holding her with tranquilizing needle in her ring. The bodyguard was tranquilized and Julia jumped on the back of Murdoc King preventing him from shooting Diego. Pedro was distracted by Julia’s action that gave a chance for Diego to pull out the gun, which was given by Julia, from his back waist and shot Pedro right at his head. Blood was everywhere and Pedro died!

Diego could not shoot Murdoc King as he was afraid that he missed and it hit Julia. Murdoc King threw Julia on the ground and pointed a gun at her. Just before he pulled the trigger, Diego shot Murdoc King’s head.

Julia ran fast towards Diego and said, “Are you okay? Your ring saved me.”

“Your gun saved me too,” replied Diego with a smile. “I hope I won’t see blood anymore.”

“I feel weak after seeing blood, can I lay on your lap?” said Diego cheekily.

The war outside the hospital was over too with police as the winner. Diego and Julia walked out the hospital and met Julia’s dad. Julia’s dad was happy to see both of them alive. After being explained about Diego’s past, Julia’s dad was also proud that Diego had saved the country from nuclear threat.

One month later, Diego fulfilled his promise. He changed the ring in Julia’s finger with a wedding ring. Diego finally could live peacefully with Julia.

-FIN-

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#082 The Tranquilizer 2 : The Last Blood (Part7)

“Excuse me, I am looking for a patient named Diego Mann in this hospital,” asked Murdoc King holding a gun.

The nurse was afraid but she had no choice but to give the information to Murdoc King. The police arrived and gunfire couldn’t be avoided. Both parties were firing at each other. Diego heard the gunshots and went to find Julia.

“Let’s go!” ordered Murdoc King.

Pedro asked Murdoc King to wait. He believed that Diego would have known if they were there and advised to check the CCTV room first. They then broke into the CCTV room and checked every camera in the hospital. In one of the monitor they saw Diego giving a goodbye kiss to Julia!

“What a lovely girl,” said Murdoc King.

The six of them separated into two groups to find either Diego or Julia. The first group consisted of three bodyguards and the other group consisted of Murdoc King, Pedro, and a bodyguard.

The first group went upstairs using lift. They arrived at the floor where they saw Diego in the monitor. Three of them split and walked around. One of them saw Diego passing by. He started shooting at Diego, but they missed him. The other two heard the gunshot and ran back to aid their friend. Once they arrived they saw their friend lying on the floor. Diego whistled at them. They chased Diego and saw him entering a room. Diego was hiding behind the door. Once both of them entered the room Diego shot one of them with tranquilizing needle. The other one turned around to shoot Diego, but the gun was hit by Diego. They started fighting. In the end the last enemy was tranquilized by Diego.

“Diego Mann, please come to the lobby to meet your girlfriend, Julia,” said Murdoc King through the hospital speaker.

“Say hello to your boyfriend would ya?” asked Murdoc King.

Julia did not want to speak but Murdoc King pulled her hair that made her scream. Diego could not bear hearing his lover in pain so he rushed back to the hospital lobby.

-To Be Continued-

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#076 The Tranquilizer 2 : The Last Blood (Part 6)

“We all go back to the hospital, now!” ordered Julia’s dad.

At the other side, the big truck was nearing.

“Spread the spike strip!” ordered the leader.

The big truck did not slow down at all! It drove passed the spike strip and the tires were broken. It lost its balance but it still could ram away the police cars and the barricades to make way for other cars behind it. Soon a number of black cars drove pass the barricade.

“The cars passed through, we couldn’t hold them down,” reported the leader of the group.

“Drive faster, we need to get to the hospital as soon as possible,” Julia’s dad ordered his troops.

The enemies arrived first at the hospital. Murdoc King alighted with Pedro behind him. Pedro chose four of his best men to accompany them into the hospital and the rest of the enemy troops were told to hold the police from entering the hospital.

“So this is where my son’s killer is hiding,” said Murdoc King looking at the hospital.

The four bodyguards killed the policemen and the guards in front of the hospital. Then Murdoc King, Pedro, and four bodyguards walked into the hospital to kill Diego!

-To Be Continued-

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